Critique my drawing

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Provide any feedback or criticism.

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Cartoon Illustrator And Concept Artist Looking For Work

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Hello!

My name is Martin Dubravicky and I am a freelance concept artist and illustrator based in Slovakia.
You can find more in my portfolio at dubravicky.com. If you are interested in hiring me, you can contact me either through my website, or send me an email at martin@dubravicky.com .

Here are a few examples of my work:

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Thank you!

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DSG 2393: Tumor stronghold

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DSG 2393: Tumor stronghold

DSG 2393: Tumor stronghold

Tumor stronghold

This ungodly fortress has been build on grounds that provide iron and rock for it's everlasting growth. Some say it has a conscious of it's own and the workers and architects expanding it are merely slaves of it's will. The black smoke rising from it's industrial heart can be seen from miles away.


Zero metal visualization ability ("Aphantasia"?) - question about art approach.

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Hello,

I can not visualize anything with my "mind's eye". Even faces that I know and see everyday. I thought that term "mind's eye" is just language phrase but supposedly most people can actually see shapes and images when they close their eyes. I know it is possible because very rarely when I am tired and falling a sleep I truly see some visual images. But normally I can't. I just see darkness.

When I am drawing from my head ("imagination") I follow procedure (head: draw oval, divide into half etc.) and I also can visually judge does something look right or wrong. But I can't see my drawing before I draw it. When I am drawing something I have drawn couple times before I feel where to make marks but I don't see. Image reveals on paper as I'm drawing.

My art goal:
To be able to draw from imagination with confidence and creativity, detailed, realistic, natural (lifelike, fluid, not stiff procedural) drawings. Like Kim Jung Gi or Kentaro Miura.
I can learn all human anatomy by heart but I'm affraid my drawings still will look artificial and procedurally made.

Questions:
1. Do You fellow artists really have ability to actually see and trace mental images? (Actually see them.)
2. Does my potetial (by not mentally seeing) is really limited to stiff procedural drawings?
3. Does someone have any solid, tested advice? I have tried some visualisation exercises but its like training telekinesis or levitation. Zero results.
4. Should I just draw more, grind, build mileage and everything will fall into place?

Bellow are my drawings from reference. I can not mentaly visualize even that simple gestures.
Thanx for reading and Your time.
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[JULY SALE] Coolorus: Color Wheel for Photoshop 40% Discount!

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Anoother Beer Label

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Hey all,

Working on a beer label (mock this time). I'm having trouble figuring out what the value and color of the ground should be if it were covered in leaves, lit by moonlight. Any other C&C welcome. Thank you!
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DSG 2392: Hairy otter

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DSG 2392: Hairy otter

DSG 2392: Hairy otter

Hairy Otter

Otters are pretty hairy already, but this one is even hairier! So much hair.


Creepy Face

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WIP. Decided to take another stab at this one for fun. C&C would be much appreciated.
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Please critique

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Hello, I did this photo study but I think the colours and values I've used aren't very appealing. I think maybe I should be exaggerating more compared to the original photo, but I'm not sure how to do this. Could anyone please give me some feedback on how to improve in these areas, or any others?

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DSG 2391: Beer god shrine

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DSG 2391: Beer god shrine

DSG 2391: Beer god shrine

Beer god shrine

It is the shrine for the almighty god of deliberate poisoning. Blessed be the destroyer of brain cells!